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I should have told you, the moment that I met you, that I could fall head over heels for you.

When we spent late nights talking about everything and nothing, I should have told you that I was attracted to you.

When you showed me your sensitive side, then hurriedly tried to cover it with a witty phrase, I should have told you that I was in awe of you.

When the rain was falling, so fast we couldn't see, I should have kissed you.

When the night was cold and you complained of it's bitterness, I should have held your hand.

When you smiled and my knees went weak, I should have told you.

When you touched me, I should have mentioned the jump of my stomach.

When I saw the ache of sadness in your eyes, I should have held you fast to me.

When I looked into your eyes, and you asked what was the matter, I should have told you that I adore you and when you showed me things, no one else has, I should have said, that I feel everything for you.

When you stood beside me and asked why I was staring, I should have told you how strong you make me feel and when you walked away, I should have screamed how weak I am without you.

When you were talking to others, I should have begged for your attention.

I should have told you how jealous I am of the people who know you much better than I.

I should have mentioned the times I spent plotting how to bring out the smile, that warms everything inside of me, but I didn't and now your walking away, and I'm calling to you, you turn, and I'm speechless.

I don't know what to say but your waiting and I have to say it now or I'll loose you, and without you I'm nothing.

Stumbling and mumbling, you ask what I'm trying to say. So I say the only thing that matters.

I love you.
This has to be one of my favorite ones! I would hope it speaks for itself. All the things that lovers feel and want to say...in a poem.
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:iconboybig5411:
boybig5411 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017  Student General Artist
i feel this way so much just sucks its ever been true for the other person 
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boybig5411 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2017  Student General Artist
wow so beautiful 
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snowywolf13 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I actually started crying reading this, I relate to it so much. <3
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:iconheer88:
heer88 Featured By Owner May 27, 2013
Thanx man your words are just perfect to my condition what i am going through.I hope it will help me out...
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
You're welcome! I'm hoping things work out for you. I know how tough it can be in that situation. But I'm a girl ;)
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:iconheer88:
heer88 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
Well I am suprised words from a girl...
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Why is that surprising? lol ^.^
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:iconheer88:
heer88 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
I am suprised cuz this days its not ofent that a girls uses such intense words.
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:iconmiiabel:
miiabeL Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
who and where?! When did you crawl into my head and steal the words from my lips
haha man
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Glad you enjoyed it. *Curtsies*
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MissPaperJoker Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
moving!
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
Thankies ever so much!
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sookie-bill-eric-sam Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful job
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
Awww thanks!
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Apocalyptic-Bliss Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
Perfect.
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2009
Thank you very much!
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Imagine30 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2009
This is beautiful... it brought tears to my eyes. I'm faving this
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2009
Thanks sweetie, I'm glad it touched you. I'm sorry you teared up though.
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XxXLawlietLoverXxX Featured By Owner May 20, 2009
I love this poem!
I've done everything in it but the last part I'm stuck on,hes turned around but the words won't come out...
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
I totally understand...its getting over the fear of being rejected...I guess lol
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XxXLawlietLoverXxX Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
Yeah,just gotta get over it :/
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
Aww, thats a sad way to look at it.
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XxXLawlietLoverXxX Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
i guess so ^^;
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner May 21, 2009
lol no biggie
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ShadowOfLife Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008
it's times like these that i think you the better writer of the two of us... and i like the raw quality of it, makes it honest
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2008
There isn't a better writer between the two of us. There are two different styles...thats all.
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ShadowOfLife Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2008
two different styles? do tell!
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
I shall tell you...in a note?
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ShadowOfLife Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2008
absolutely.... *waits with bated breath*
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bbyxbanaaana Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008
Love it!
That's just how I feel, but it's too late.
Now I just keep wondering what if.
I wish I could've told him how I felt.
But, it's simply too late.
Great poem!
And, keep it up!
Imm put this on my faves!
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008
Awww...thanks hun, I appreciate it so much! I'm really sorry that its too late!
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bbyxbanaaana Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2008
ahaha.
it's fine.
im getting over it.
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2008
Thats good then. Thanks again.
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takusan-no-ai Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2008
Beautiful. I think it realistically depicts how someone thinks and feels in that situation.
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2008
Awww...thank you so so much!
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Hiddenflames Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
you got me! oh my god you got me!
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:iconcyre:
cyre Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2008
I did?
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Hiddenflames Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
yea! totally!
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skadoosh Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
ooh, I love this... It makes me feel that "butterflies-in-the-stomach" kind of thing. :love: Really well written and attention grabbing too! I enjoyed it. :)
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cyre Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2008
thanks I really appreciate it.
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desertmoondragon Featured By Owner May 15, 2008  Professional Filmographer
very well written and beautifully done:)

i love how it nearly lacks structure, which is so appropriate for what you are describing.

really beautiful to read:)

(bladegrasp sent me, btw)
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cyre Featured By Owner May 15, 2008
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
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Daiichi Featured By Owner May 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
I think it's form truly depicts the hurried nature of a lover's heart when they finally call out when it's now or never..I think the imagery is lovely because it shows attention to details that lovers hold deep in their hearts..I love it!
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cyre Featured By Owner May 13, 2008
Yay! I'm glad you like it so well. This one was very emotional for me because when I wrote it, I believed I was in love, when in all actuality I was not.

Thank you for your sweet words, they mean a lot to me.
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Daiichi Featured By Owner May 13, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. My poetry used to be pure emotion..so poetry of this type still appeals to me deeply.
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cyre Featured By Owner May 13, 2008
I'm glad you like it. I like your current style of poetry, I'll have to check out your old style.
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Bladegrasp Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
All the poets please come to rise~

I'd like to propose a toast in name of the new definition of "heartwarming" we get to enjoy tonight. Please raise your cups and go along with me for a second here.


If I'm ever so blessed to find a person that can love me that explicitly, I think I would have no choice but to fall down to my knees and implore mercy. Blatantly direct expressions of love like this are deliciously cruel; most of the time we know it's going to shake someone's heaven, and the gossiping angels eavesdropping from above will trip on each other over the clouds... thunderstorms of emotion are soon to follow. The strongest, most piercing form of adoration a man can ever wish for; unchallenged, unobstructed, straightforward devotion. There should be a sin way beyond lust to penalize the act of a woman impaling a man's heart with such perfect work of art...

But God knows better, and I'm no judge~


Fascinated,
~Bladegrasp
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cyre Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
*stares speechless*

Um...thank you. You could've just faved it like everyone else but...no I like this more.

One day you will find a love like this and with a bit of luck, so will I.

I'm very deeply pleased that you enjoyed it. Truly. I hope that someday I will present this to the man I fall in love with.

That was a very very pretty speech you made, I don't know if I deserve it all.
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Bladegrasp Featured By Owner May 10, 2008
I still owe you a half of hope~ :nod::hug:
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